Some of the improvements that she said we could make included the lighting, she felt that there was a clear contrast in shots were we filmed using artificial light to other shots in which we used a light that looks cold. So to work on this when we have finished filming im going to edit the colour to follow a colour continuity throughout.
Another comment we received was that we needed some sort of sound effect once using the box to infer that the box allows you top travel in order to create a mysterious sci-fi effect. Also in our foot chase we were told that we needed a fast paced music that would bring up the tension and speed of the chase.
Overall I feel that we are making great progress as a team.